Reviews For A Sweet and Forbidden Love
Name: miss_tatiana (Anonymous) · Date: 19/12/07 - 09:12 pm · For: The Newly Weds
lucky as hell chouji lol..
Name: miss_tatiana (Anonymous) · Date: 19/12/07 - 09:10 pm · For: The Newly Weds
i looved this chapter
Name: Some Fuckin Dude (Anonymous) · Date: 14/11/07 - 04:11 pm · For: When Pale meets Dark
Sweet this is a great story my friend suggested it you are a great writer please update
Name: Some Fuckin Dude (Anonymous) · Date: 14/11/07 - 04:11 pm · For: When Pale meets Dark
Sweet this is a great story my friend suggested it you are a great writer please update
Name: Some Fuckin Dude (Anonymous) · Date: 14/11/07 - 04:11 pm · For: When Pale meets Dark
Sweet this is a great story my friend suggested it you are a great writer please update
Name: lurtz101 (Signed) · Date: 18/06/07 - 10:07 pm · For: When Pale meets Dark
..... i... just can't say anything at all i am shocked....'_' it's just..... too... hot!
Name: angelgirl555 (Signed) · Date: 02/05/07 - 04:05 pm · For: When Pale meets Dark
What is going to happen
Name: shadow shriken (Signed) · Date: 22/04/07 - 04:53 pm · For: When Pale meets Dark
WTF! naruto and sasgay did it mutha fu *KxS claps his hand over S S's mouth*
Name: shadow shriken (Signed) · Date: 22/04/07 - 03:18 pm · For: When Pale meets Dark
wait a sec....your a girl and lesbian ain't you?!
Author's Response: Yes...
Name: kagekage (Signed) · Date: 25/03/07 - 09:15 pm · For: The Newly Weds
more please
Author's Response: Ok
Name: MistyNight (Signed) · Date: 24/03/07 - 01:25 pm · For: The Newly Weds
Ok so I like the story itself, I really do, but you could do better at the grammar. For example, when you write ;" "I love you too" coo Temari as her set Hinata on the couch softly. " then its She, not her. And the ^^ smileys, dont really fit into the stories, we understand that they're happy and cute, we dont need the smileys to understand it.
Anyways, Nice Story, I like it ^^
Author's Response: Thanks for the critisism ^^ It'll only make my story better ^^
Author's Response: Holy fucking crap?!?! I just totally noticed all those little errors....
Name: Arconin (Signed) · Date: 16/03/07 - 04:46 pm · For: The Newly Weds
i cant wait for the sequel! ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks ^^ Coming sometime next month ^^
Name: Mimiteufel (Signed) · Date: 14/03/07 - 06:41 pm · For: The Newly Weds
that was funny the whole having to go pee thing incident anyways -the story is great but it is kinda short but thats ok great job on it, can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you so much ^^ It's going to be a lot of chapters that are short
Name: Mimiteufel (Signed) · Date: 13/03/07 - 06:35 pm · For: The Newly Weds
awwwwwwwwwww how cute i really like the story its really great, can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: *Giggles* No prob, this is going to be my greatest project EVER!!!
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 13/03/07 - 06:06 pm · For: The Newly Weds
more yuri plz oh mighty divine being
Author's Response: Ok ^^ It will get better at about Chap. 5 when they finally get their first "Together Smex"
Name: Karletta (Anonymous) · Date: 13/03/07 - 04:21 pm · For: The Newly Weds
I loved it, cant wait for the rest to come out!!!
Author's Response: Aww thanks you very much ^^
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 13/03/07 - 03:03 pm · For: The Newly Weds
MORE NOW PLZ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: *Giggles* Ok, I didn't know if anyone would like it ^^
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