Reviews For Fox Fire
Name: ethan bowen (Anonymous) · Date: 02/03/14 - 05:57 pm · For: Konoha Civil War
do you make those up yourself. if you have skills
Name: ethan bowen (Anonymous) · Date: 02/03/14 - 05:25 pm · For: Konoha Civil War
Name: Tragedy (Signed) · Date: 20/06/12 - 04:50 pm · For: Naruto: Skipping the Rift
Author's Response: Thanks
Name: rockon5002 (Signed) · Date: 31/03/10 - 04:18 pm · For: Konoha Civil War
thank god theres more and I think you should do a follow up based a few years later I don't know if this is just me but I want more like is there still unrest in the village or is there still mistrust of the hyuga going on are naruto and hinata married is naruto the hokage can temari walk or has she been paralized andnhow are things going in Tsunadas (hope I spelled that right) village and there are tons more questions left unanswered so please at least do a little thing that atleast answeres one of those questions. please this was just too awesome to leave off at that.
Name: sandman123 (Signed) · Date: 11/03/10 - 04:36 pm · For: Konoha Civil War
i have to say....these fanfics are amazing this is the first review iv ever done, but these deserve it you have a truely great creative mind. five stars. well done.
Name: eldertensa (Signed) · Date: 17/01/10 - 08:22 am · For: Konoha Civil War
Name: Random Naruto Fan (Anonymous) · Date: 17/04/08 - 01:36 am · For: Konoha Civil War
The story was well written, though very dark for a kids manga. Poor Lee!
The death was kind of needed, admittedly. Because of Kiba (and partially Akamaru) the story would not have gotten as far as it did. Ino's death motivated Shikamaru to carve out Hanabi's eyes out, because of Kakashi and Hinata. The eye thing was a good plot device, but very grim.
Why Lee and Shika? It was not crucial, but oh well. The author has sole jurisdiction of a fic. Meh.
Author's Response: First off, Thanks for the review. Yes, I knew it was a little dark but I figure that at least it wasn't the same ol' cut and dry crap thats already been done before. Why Lee and Shikamaru? Because it seriously wouldn't be expected. Sometimes not everyone is able to get off their best moves before a fight is over and I wanted to show that.
Name: insert name here (Anonymous) · Date: 19/03/08 - 10:58 pm · For: Konoha Civil War
Awww!!! i really like Lee, he's my second favourite character, i hope he doesn't die, but what i ant to know is:
Why was Anko able to keep up with him?
Why didn't he take his weights off?
Why didn't he open the gates?
Man... What a drag...
Author's Response: <.< WHy's Anko able to keep up? Because..um...PLot Not Jutsu!rn>.> Why didn't he take his weights off? Who says he had them on?rn<.< Gates? Maybe he just didn't get a chance to. s*** happens yo.rnNah seriously I was trying make the fights as realistic (Ninja-wise) as possible. Maybe a real experienced Ninja like Anko was able to constantly attack and keep up with him...I dunno. I just thought it would be a good match-up
Name: insert name here (Anonymous) · Date: 19/03/08 - 09:28 pm · For: Konoha Civil War
Two things, First of all, Shikamaru is So. Damn. Cool that it's not even funny...
Second: Kakashi is AWESOME!!!! him, Lee and Naruto kick so much Ass that it's unreal. 11/10
Name: insert name here (Anonymous) · Date: 19/03/08 - 07:50 pm · For: Naruto: Skipping the Rift
Lee is just the BEST!!! i mean, when i saw his name there i knew that this guy was going down. Lee didn't even ave to take off his weights.
Dynamically Owned... Bitch!
Name: Chelsea Dubbs (Anonymous) · Date: 12/03/08 - 01:33 pm · For: Konoha Civil War
Wow. This story is really awsome. Keep it up author.
Author's Response: thanks, I could've done better thought i think.
Name: mk (Anonymous) · Date: 01/03/08 - 12:07 am · For: Konoha Civil War
wheres "the last blade of konoha"
Author's Response: Uh...haven't written it yet >.< been kinda busy.
Name: hashala2694 (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 04:38 am · For: Konoha Civil War
that was AWESOME!
Name: hashala2694 (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 03:12 am · For: Konoha Civil War
i love gai sensei and lee they are histerical!
Name: hashala2694 (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 01:58 am · For: Konoha Civil War
this song is so perfect for shikamaru
Name: hashala2694 (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 01:41 am · For: Konoha Civil War
oh god thats so sad but hell yeah take the bitches eyes out hahahahaha ... HA! Shit this is such a sad story but it is so good kill Hiashi now do it do it pretty please.
Name: hashala2694 (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 01:28 am · For: Konoha Civil War
what is this from i need to know!
Name: hashala2694 (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 01:27 am · For: Konoha Civil War
holy shit exorcist bitch needs to die i cant believe it what a bitch i just want to strangle her and jeez right when we get some good happening she has to screw it up so now we all need to pick up any weapons we have and mentally hurl them at hanabi the demon seed from hell!
Name: hashala2694 (Signed) · Date: 22/12/07 - 11:40 pm · For: Naruto: Skipping the Rift
hell yeah go lee go lee poor sakura i wish she were with lee they are so cute together but needless to say she is going to need to mentally recuperate before she is ready for anything maybe lee can help wink wink but God what happened is so horrible but it will work out it has too and that damn fake husband needs to die as in now come on God hit him with lightning or something we need divine intervention.
Name: Konoha's red flash (Anonymous) · Date: 19/12/07 - 03:21 pm · For: Konoha Civil War
Could you please post the third part of the series, it is reall good and from the looks of it you haven't updated in a long time
Name: Moon Ecstasy (Anonymous) · Date: 13/10/07 - 01:29 am · For: Konoha Civil War
Well aside from the fact that I think there was an entire chapter missing somewhere between the Art of Breaking Part 3 and The Ghost of You it was still a good story. I have to say though, that you're ending was kinda, well rushed or forced. It didn't have the depth and detail and believability that the other chapters had. Also some of the characters acted really out of... pardon the unintended repetition... out of character.
So the ending kinda flopped and disappointed.
But overall it was still a good story, you made me cry and that happens rarely.
Author's Response: Yeah, I feel the same way...might end up doing a remix or special edition
Name: Moon Ecstasy (Anonymous) · Date: 13/10/07 - 12:55 am · For: Konoha Civil War
Fucking hell... the only consoling thought I have is that Lee is not dead in the manga... but damn... I havn't cried that hard since Fred died in the last Harry Potter book... I have a hate/love thing for you now that will fade by the time I finish the series and turn back into a love thing (and if you're freaking out thinking Oh God Creepy Stalker Girl: It's really hard to stalk people over the internet and there are different types of love... this is a love that I gain for my favorite authors... a love that says "thank you for this story please write more")
Anyways I'm still crying and It's three in the morning and I have homework I should be doing but I'm gonna continue reading.
Name: Moon Ecstasy (Anonymous) · Date: 13/10/07 - 12:40 am · For: Konoha Civil War
Okay okay... I'm on chapter 27... I know I'm much too late to vote and all that... but I'm taking a deep breath and steeling myself for the next chapter... I hope to all heavens Lee won't die... PLEASE GOD!!!!! I will not flame you if he does die... but please note that I will cry... real tears! That's how good your writing is it has involved me this much! I WILL CRY!!!!! Okay... deep breaths.... here I go....
Name: Moon Ecstasy (Anonymous) · Date: 12/10/07 - 10:21 pm · For: Naruto: Skipping the Rift
My hands are trembling... it's been a long time since I've read a fanfic this good. A really long time. I am simply astounded that you have come up with such a good story, and I can't think... I can't describe how good it feels to read a story like this, full of loyalty, friendship, and courage after all the disturbing, horrifying books I've had to read in school this year.
Thank you for this brilliant work!
It is my believe that all reviews should come with constructive criticism. And all I have is there are a few spelling and grammar errors as well as awkward sentences that need repair. That's it!
Once more, you rock!
Name: Kieran (Anonymous) · Date: 16/09/07 - 11:58 pm · For: Konoha Civil War
god thats a gud story, really gud story, a heck of a lot of mistakes, as in spelling and shit, but still blody awesome, btw how can naruto be a queen? and when is the next thing gonna be dun? :-)
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