You're really good at poetry!
It has a really good rhythm to it. :]
It's not easy writing poetry. Tbh, I just attempted it before I saw yours, and pah. Gave up. Poetry clearly isn't my forté. XD Ham, bam. Clam, Ram? You sees my dilemma. XD But you've got some real talent going on there. ^^

Heh, sucks when it feels like the worlds against you, doesn't it? You said you wrote these two poems a while ago, so I hope you found your feet again :]

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and rhymes are often hard to find, sometimes I have to leave what I am doing in the hope that one will just come to me, which they often seem to do.rnAlso, thanks for the optimism, I certainly have my low moments and that wasn't the last of them, but I've been pretty good since...