That was great. Amazing. Beautiful. Lovely. Sad. Everyething and more; I loved it. Especially how you compared the innocent Sakura to what she was in your story. I also like the end of the lemon, very ironic.

It really was well written and it was a great idea and I think you did a great job. The only problem I saw was in the lemon, it said "...into his mouth and..." when it should say "in to her mouth".

Like I said, wonderful job.

Author's Response: OOOH, okay I changed that. Thank you. And thank you very much for the review! I really appreciate it and I'm glad you like my story.