Oh, God, Hanabai, don't tell him! He'll tell Hiashi, and so on and so forth! Oh, my GOD! Don't. Tell. Him!
o that is not right, giving a cliff hanger like that O-o now u made me more eager to keep reading your story and i didnt even think that was possible, i love your story a lot as it is^_^
Wow. I just finished reading all 18 chapters, and I've got to say, I like this story a whole lot. Great job, and keep up the good work!
Aww cool.
I love it! Write more! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
you are GOD and this story is SOOOOO GUD
im addicted I been readin it on my PDA all day
keep em comming A+++++++++++++++
I usually get into the more violent fics but i find myself unable to stop reading this. I think almost everone who has seen Naruto through the cunnin exams has wanted a story like yours. thanks for writing
Wow! Cool chapter as i've said before.
I Love it. I hope you add more chapters soon. I try to wait a while to read so more than one chapter is up at a time. They flow together beautifully.
Author's Response:Ooooh thank you =] I think I'll upload more soon hehe
maybe I'll do two at the same time, thats an idea lol xx
So AWSOME!
dang sakura is a bad friend
I like the kyuubi when he's nicer too it makes it a better story when he's on Naruto's side. And I love that he calls him kit it's so cute.
It's not my fault she's dead, blame Sasuke!
Author's Response:I kno =O
dam him!!! lol
erm, Leila. I wouldn't suggest reading my newest chapter if you feel depressed, it may very well cause you to commit suicide...It depressed me just writing it...
But death is not always what it appears to be...
Author's Response:Too late tehe...I know though, how could you =O
You actualy cant make her die! would be too sad
and all day today i have read sad story after sad story =[
but its inspired me to write more and i wanna have the next chappie up before sunday =]
Oh and btw you are such a good writer, and im sure you'll only get better!
And im glad your enjoying the story hehe xx
it cool that you added the Kyuubi
Shut up! Anyone who doesn't like this story is doomed to be killed by my "Chi Buunshin No Jutsu!" (blood clone jutsu) and how do you know what Gaara will be like without the Shukaku (sp?)
sorry for this comment...but what the hell!! is it the goddamn kyuubi that try to destroy the whole Konohagakure.....ur story is great but have many chracter inconsistencies.....(e.g. Gaara being a pervert....)
Author's Response:lol i didn't really mean to make Gaara that much of a pervert hehe it just sorta turned out that way
as for the kyuubi i like him when hes nicer =] enyways its not like other fics havnt made him nice, plus i needed it like this for later in the story.
thank you for your review and i will take what you have said into account =]
Wow! Mintaged chapter, he misses her already. Wow.
COME ON....! MORE, PLEASE! This is so awsome!
Oh Sakura....
Good story!! XD
More, this is really good....
Nice... i look forward to the next chapter
I hate lemon scnes...but with your story i love it...you might surpass Jiraiya icha icha tactics:P
Author's Response:hehe =] thank you xx
I do plan on having heavier lemon later but i will worn you guys first hehe and i hope you like those scenes as well xx
and im glad your enjoying it thanks for the review xx
I really like this story, it's awesome. Keep up the good work.
oh wait, never mind about the shino thing. i forgot to read it all the way.