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Name: Megs (Signed) · Date: 09/09/08 - 08:40 pm · For: Chapter 17

O_O............WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!!!!Why did u stop there!!What is wrong w/ u.I know she will say yes and everything but do u have 2 kill all the fun?!

Name: radek (Anonymous) · Date: 12/04/08 - 02:52 pm · For: Missing

Don't be mean adn check spelling

Name: forbidden shinobi (Signed) · Date: 22/03/08 - 04:35 pm · For: Chapter 17

GREAT story, but way too rushed. shoulda been more like 40 chapters.. good luck on the next one.

Name: sheechiibii (Signed) · Date: 21/03/08 - 04:44 pm · For: Chapter 17

b-b-b-but you didnt say if she seaid yes or not =|
Oh what am i talking about,... of course she said yes!!! =]
Awww too sweet =D
I wish it wasn't over though, I'm gonna miss it!
Well... CONGRATS on finishing your first fanfic =] and you did a great job too hehe it was awsome. I'll probably go start reading one of your other fics now lol toods =]
Xx..xX

Name: stylin_crimson (Signed) · Date: 21/03/08 - 04:04 pm · For: Chapter 17

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!! Bless him!

Name: stylin_crimson (Signed) · Date: 29/02/08 - 12:59 pm · For: Life and Death

Eh? Did he make a promise? I dont get it.

Name: mk (Anonymous) · Date: 27/02/08 - 11:55 pm · For: Life and Death

yay when next chapter?

Name: sheechiibii (Signed) · Date: 27/02/08 - 08:23 am · For: Life and Death

=[ aww no that was so sad... i wish she hadnt died.
But well i supose its good cus now sakura is alive and Naruto is the hokage!
Whats he going to do to the Hyuuga rules though *smiles evily* oh and i love yooh too... as a friend =]
Cant wait for the next chapie =] yays for yooh =P lol sorry Im like being wierd today! xx

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Oh, and the Hyuuga rules, during the neji naruto fight, Neji says somthing about the main and branch families, blah blah blah, and Naruto promised to change it once he became Hokage.rnrnOh, and the evil smile is scaring me....*twitches and looks scared*

Name: sheechiibii (Signed) · Date: 25/02/08 - 11:29 am · For: Chapter 15

Ahhh no wai!!! what is with you and cliff hangers grrr! im gonna burst with the suspence. I mean someone with lots of chakra, that would be Naruto...right? Oh no, i dont want anything to happen to Naruto. luving the story though! xx

Author's Response: No It'a not Naruto....

Name: Gaaragirl911 (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 - 03:02 pm · For: Lets Go!

Love the story, Aiko! By the way, what's your opinion of Sasu/Naru? That 'll be one of the chapters that you're in.

Name: runescap21 (Anonymous) · Date: 19/02/08 - 09:35 pm · For: Chapter 14

you always end on cliffhangers...
it pisses me off...
lol

Name: runescap21 (Anonymous) · Date: 19/02/08 - 09:29 pm · For: Missing

asshole...

Name: sheechiibii (Signed) · Date: 18/02/08 - 06:02 pm · For: Chapter 14

dude! Eventualy =P i was like omg where arr you gurl =] You've made me feel all exited bout the next chapter though. I hope Tsunade can heal her too ='[ it wood be sad if Sakura does die like for real =P sorry my english total sucks today! haha
xx

Name: sheechiibii (Signed) · Date: 08/02/08 - 09:12 am · For: Consolment

eeeee! ace story hehe
loved it!
and i totaly hope that grany tsunade can heal our dear sakura-chan! XD
oh and Gaara's last name is like sabaku or summit lyk tht =P xx

Name: sheechiibii (Signed) · Date: 02/02/08 - 03:30 pm · For: Anger

Aaah, so much so sudenly!
This chapter was so intence =D
LOVED it hehe
i dnt wait till the next one...please save Naruto, he cannot die! =P gr8 job btw xx

Author's Response: I'm gonna try to save him, but in the end it's up to whether the nurse on the ship can heal worth a crap.

Name: sheechiibii (Signed) · Date: 02/02/08 - 04:42 am · For: Death of a friend, Hate of an enemy

='[
Nooo, please say she isnt dead.
Like she'l wake up in the next chapter???
omg! =[ I'm like crying now and this is the second time reading it =O
Even though its sad I'm like hooked!
And your writing just keeps getting better and better xx

Author's Response: Just be patient.... Trust me, averything is happy in the end....

Name: sheechiibii (Signed) · Date: 01/02/08 - 10:06 am · For: Memories

Eeeeeee!!!
O LOVED it!
Youre right it was deffinitely your best chapter =]
so sweet and it was like you could totly imagine that flashback actualy happening =]
made me smile, your a good writer! Now... to the next chapter! hehe xx

Author's Response: Thanks! But seriously, you are a much better writer than me. but still, thanks!

Name: sheechiibii (Signed) · Date: 31/01/08 - 10:06 am · For: Chapter 7

Nooooo!
Thats so evil...i wanna know what happens =[
dnt want to wait, that was an ace chapter. This story just keeps getting better and better!

Author's Response: Thanks! That means a lot coming from you! I love your story "Mission of Lust." It just rocks out loud!

Name: sheechiibii (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 - 04:50 pm · For: Lets Go!

Im realy liking this story =]
its too sweet that naruto was all worried =P NARUHINA xxx
sorry i just HAD to say that >.<
Oh and i know what you mean about school
its realy annoying when you dont have the time to update!!!
anywasy ... please continue =D

Name: stylin_crimson (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 - 03:46 am · For: Missing

Oh no! Has Saske taken them hostage or something? Pretty cool story.

Author's Response: thnk you for reviewing. Still, I wish some other people would....but hey, what can you do?

Name: stylin_crimson (Signed) · Date: 31/12/07 - 10:17 am · For: Suspicions

Cool story, please continue it.

Name: stylin_crimson (Signed) · Date: 30/12/07 - 01:58 pm · For: Lets Go!

Wow. Cool story about air ships but omg Sakura is going out with Gaara. Cool.

Author's Response: thanx.

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