Reviews For In Your Shadow/In Your Mind
Name: Kari (Signed) · Date: 21/04/09 - 06:37 pm · For: Amongst Clouds
Awe...So cute!!
Name: Kari (Signed) · Date: 21/04/09 - 06:37 pm · For: Amongst Clouds
Awe...So cute!!
Name: Seins_Sorrow (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 - 04:16 pm · For: In Your Shadow/In Your Mind
I love'd evey minute of it, evey moment made me wonder what if she said no..what if he never broke it off with Temari.
You two are wonderful writers as a team and as your own person.
Author's Response: Wow. I thought this series faded into obscurity a long time ago, but I guess not.
Thank you for your comments. I'm sure Millie will greatly appreciate them as well.
Yeah... we do pretty well as a team. We haven't worked together for a long time, though. I've been busy, and she hasn't been on here for some time now.
Anyways, thanks once again.
Name: TTM (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 - 05:59 pm · For: In Fate's Hands
Later this week, hopefully. The chapter is taking a long a lot of time (I'm re-writing and editing much so it is perfect), currently between two and four hours a day.
However it will be a big first chapter so hopefully that makes up for things :)
Thanks for the continued interest. Just as a side-note, does ANYONE listen to the music I recommend at the start of every chapter? I select it specifically for the feel of the chapter you know...
Author's Response: some of the songs i know, and others i don't. i'm so excited about the story, i really can't wait to read it!!!
Name: TTM (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 - 10:03 am · For: In Fate's Hands
*applauds*
Hey! Congratulations on the end of a well written series, the both of you! (At least I think it's the end...)
It's cool that you could team up for something like this, especially since I like and respect both of you and your styles of writing.
10 for the series, and congratulations again on a well written series. Bravo!
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-- milliexchan : thankyou so much *bows* and when is your next story going to be up? i'm looking forward to it so much!!! =D
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 11/08/07 - 04:29 pm · For: In Fate's Hands
Aww... that is so sweet. Makes me remember the last time I wrote a kiss scene.
This is marvelous. I enjoyed working with you, too, and I hope we can work together more in the future.
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-- milliexchan : yeah, this was a lot of fun. and the kiss scene...i didn't want too much detail, i wanted to leave most of it to the reader's imagination. i sometimes think it works better that way. other times...smut is the way to go! and yeah, in the future we should definitely do something like this again =D
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 10/08/07 - 02:49 pm · For: In Fate's Hands
Whew... finally got the second chapter up. I'm hoping you can wrap this up, Millie... I'm totally out of creative energy for this thing. Do whatever you like- a kiss scene, lots of sweet talk, or even smut. It's all up to you. Good luck! I'm highly anticipating your conclusion to the story!
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-- milliexchan : okay, i'll get to work on it asap! that chapter was totally amazing, i hope what i do next isn't going to be rubbish =S i'll try my hardest! Yay! *excited*
Name: TTM (Signed) · Date: 10/08/07 - 05:34 am · For: In Fate's Hands
*sits at computer and waits for next chapter*
You're both good writers, this is a pleasure to read. How did you guys come to the idea of taking turns anyway?
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-- milliexchan : its basically because I saw one of SaB's letters (is this summer love?) and wanted to write a reply. then i decided to reply to another...and...well, the rest is history, as they say =P i think we've worked really well together =D
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 08/08/07 - 09:58 am · For: In Fate's Hands
Nice. I'll get working on the next chapter as soon as I can, but I don't quite feel inspired right now. Let me figure this out... it won't take long. Anyways, good job!
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-- milliexchan : cool, glad you liked it =D i might even feel inspired to write another chapter after yours, if you leave it open for that... i've really enjoyed writing with you =D
Name: rasengan_welch (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 - 04:04 pm · For: Something Fragile
dude i'm suing you man for real.... all these letters you and millie wrote made me tear..
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : Thanks... the heck!? D@mn it, I'm pleading artistic license! Call my family's lawyer... crap, I forgot his phone number! *Runs around frantically, ranting nonsense* ...... Well, that aside, thanks anyways. Can't wait to see more of A Mere Crush!
Name: TTM (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 - 03:53 am · For: The Final Chance
Ooohooo :)
This is getting interesting... I want to read more now :(
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-- milliexchan : well, i'm starting off the next part a little later on, i hope. so stay tuned =D
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 - 02:15 pm · For: The Final Chance
I do want Shikamaru to meet Ino, and since you're starting it off, you should do the part of Ino, walking to the training grounds and thinking to herself.
Just a suggestion... maybe Shikamaru would be late, and he'd arrive at the last minute while Ino's about to leave. Ino finds that she can't move... you can cut it off there, and I'll pick it up where you left off. How's that sound? I can definitely work with whatever you come up with, though, so if you have other ideas, put them to use if you like. I can handle them.
Good luck!
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-- milliexchan : i was thinking the same kinda thing!!! awesome, thats what shall happen then! will get to work on it later on hopefully, i've been thinking it over for a few days =D
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 - 01:15 pm · For: The Final Chance
Good job. I'm more than willing to do the round robin, but can you start it off? I'm out of ideas as of this moment, and I'm trying to put work into Air Mail to Neji. Thanks!
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-- milliexchan : yep sure. it will be next time i get a chance to go on the net (later this week) do you want for shikamaru to meet Ino then? (i think thats pretty much what our stories have been aiming for, but have to check!!!) i'll start it off, no worries, and i cant wait for the update to air mail to neji! =D
Name: milliexchan (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 - 11:03 am · For: Something Fragile
Reply done! It's called The Final Chance =D I was thinking that after this, we should do a two-chapter round robin or somthing, just to sum up what happens afterwards?
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : Read the reply. Good job, as always. I noticed the inconsistency with Asuma, but it's all right. I'll be more than willing to write the round robin, but can you start it off? I'm a bit out of ideas. Thanks!
Name: TTM (Signed) · Date: 05/08/07 - 07:19 am · For: Something Beautiful
This series is pretty good. Especially since I only read the materials of SaB and yourself on this site :)
Both of you have done a good job conveying the emotions here. I await the next installment.
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-- milliexchan : =D thankyou. it really means a lot that you enjoy my work. both SaB and I have worked really hard on this series, and i have to say it's nice to be appreciated! as soon as i get my brain into gear, i'll be writing the next part =D
Name: TTM (Signed) · Date: 05/08/07 - 07:15 am · For: Something Fragile
Cool series of letters mate, you and milliexchan are pretty much the only people I look at on this site, so this is pretty rokkin :)
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed all this. I was worried that lots of my stuff were sub-par. Millie's still working on the next one, I guess, so check back later if you have time.
Name: TTM (Signed) · Date: 05/08/07 - 07:10 am · For: Saying Goodbye
Wow. Nicely written mate. I don't know the song but the words seem appropriate.
Good work.
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : Thanks. I'm glad it all worked out in this. Check out the song, if you like.
Name: TTM (Signed) · Date: 05/08/07 - 07:10 am · For: Saying Goodbye
Wow. Nicely written mate. I don't know the song but the words seem appropriate.
Good work.
Name: milliexchan (Signed) · Date: 04/08/07 - 07:11 am · For: Something Fragile
Poor Shikamaru *sniff* he really is confused, isn't he =(
i'm going to get to work on a reply, but it may take a little while =D (i like the name of the series, well done!)
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : Thanks. Aww... don't cry. I'll be waiting patiently for the reply. Just let me know when you wrote it. Good luck!
Name: rasengan_welch (Signed) · Date: 03/08/07 - 03:34 pm · For: Saying Goodbye
eh,it works too.though you should always think like the viewers when it comes to writing.the title is good,but you should modify it towards other's liking.remember this when you write something new.
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : Eh. I was running out of ideas. Besides, your suggested title sounded a little too general. I wanted the title to be a bit more specific on which couple I was talking about. I'll put your suggestions here into consideration in the future.
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 03/08/07 - 02:26 pm · For: Something Beautiful
Dang... finally wrote that reply (Something Fragile). I got the series up, too (In Your Shadow/In Your Mind). Check them out if you have time. If you'd like to reply to Something Fragile, you're more than welcome! XD
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-- milliexchan : i will check out something fragile, and may well write a reply if i can get into the right mood =D
Name: rasengan_welch (Signed) · Date: 03/08/07 - 01:10 pm · For: Saying Goodbye
yo s.a.b,i have the perfect title for that series.how about 'love and decisions'? how about?
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : Thanks. Very nice suggestion, but I already came up with a title. It's called In Your Shadow/In Your Mind. Sorry!
Name: milliexchan (Signed) · Date: 03/08/07 - 07:49 am · For: Saying Goodbye
this is really good *cries* but its so sad at the same time. i hope the next reply comes soon! good luck with it. i still haven't come up with a potential name for the series, its hard enough to decide what to call the individual stories =S hopefully one of us will have a brainwave =D
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : Aww... there, there. *pats on back* It' okay. Don't worry about the title and whatnot. I'll try my best to come up with something. That goes for the reply as well. Thanks for the review!
Name: rasengan_welch (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 - 11:25 am · For: Saying Goodbye
it would be messed up if someone said you and millie-chan were actually writing the letters to eachother.instead of ino and shika.you know,millie-chanXswords_and_bandages? i'm not saying it's true,i mean someone else might think that.but anyway,the story was good.keep at your good work.
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : I know, I know. It can be a real problem if that happens. Anyways, thanks. I'd like to see more of A Mere Crush- good luck on writing it.
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 - 10:34 am · For: Something Beautiful
All right. I'll try and get the series up now. By the way, what should the title be?
Did you check out the song and the songfic? If you haven't, check them out, if you have time. I still need some time on that reply- I'm nearly out of creative energy at the moment.
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-- milliexchan : i'm not sure on a name yet... i'm sure one of us will just think of something. just let me know via review! =D