Reviews For Hidden Past
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 27/09/12 - 07:21 pm · For: Chapter Three: Missions
More development nice! Not much going on. So pretty solid all around. Can't wait to see the next update.
Author's Response: Aha, I hope I can keep the following chapters at the same level ^^;; Thanks for sticking around :D
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 27/09/12 - 05:04 pm · For: Chapter Two: Back to the Basics
Nice chapter! I was impressed with your description of her genjutsu. It was very gruesome, I liked it :D So she's learning the basics, well everyone's gotta start somewhere. Keep it up :)
Author's Response: I was so worried it was too detailed, but if that level of description is alright then that's a relief ^^; Keeping it up, I shall! Thanks a ton for the review ^^
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 27/09/12 - 04:31 pm · For: Chapter One: A New Beginning
I was a bit surprised when this caught my interest. There's not many stories on this site that catch my interest, not saying that this is bad, I'm just kind of picky with fan-fiction you know? So nice start, very descriptive and what not. It was kind of confusing how team 7 was just there and how they didn't complete their mission but it's not that big of a deal.
So I see you've put up 4 chapters already? Might I suggest slowing down a bit? It'll give people time to catch up and read, a good updating scheme is about once a week.
So yeah! In all reality I liked it! I'm gonna follow this story to see where Riku's journey takes her. Keep up the good work and I'm your first reviewer :3 yay!
Author's Response: Ah, sorry for the confusion. Was it because they didn't go to the Mission Room as well? I always thought only one shinobi had to hand in the report. Have I been mistaken this whole time? [/facedesk] Yeah, I'm going to start doing weekly updates on Saturdays. I just wanted to give people something to work with for now. Thanks so much for your input! Hope this story keeps your interest ^^;