Reviews For The Burning Will
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 02/02/12 - 06:43 pm · For: Chapter: Prologue
:o Whoops... someone's supposed to be doing her homework...
*Ahem* I really like this (: I hope you will continue soon. I'm curious about Koharu and Homura. I'm already liking Kohana's personality. Good job with this.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/02/12 - 03:30 am · For: Chapter: Prologue
I really liked this prologue. I know that chapter 1 won't continue where this left off, but I wish it did. This was actually pretty good.
My only issue would be your punctuation usage; it somewhat disrupted the flow of some sentences. Just work on your comma usage.
Overall, this was a rather nice prologue. It shows promise in the story. I would just advise to be careful of what exactly this story would entail. Usually, SasuOC stories end up virtually the same as one another. Just keep that in mind when you're writing.
Anyway, I hope to see more. Keep up the good work.