Reviews For Fate's Chosen Bingo Book
Name: Halleluyah no yuki (Signed) · Date: 23/04/16 - 03:58 am · For: Kasumi Saruni
bonjour silverwolf San, I don't know if you will see this but I would like you to know that I particularly enjoyed fates chosen and the bingo book was very helpful, I read your profile and though I've heard of you from uzumaki masumi and the like, I swear I didn't know you were a girl till I did so I was wondering if you would like to read a story of mine. it's called father before the grave and like you said I don't expect you to review every chapter, I've been told its a good read and would really appreciate your opinion...
destiny -San, saw-say-you San, I've read some of your stories as well and find it totally frigging awesome that yall decided to write this together... gambatene'. Minna,. and, yoroshi kun
Name: Jang Wo Li (Signed) · Date: 11/12/13 - 09:24 am · For: Hanabira Senshi
um hanabira's picture is broken too
Name: Jang Wo Li (Signed) · Date: 11/12/13 - 09:23 am · For: Yuki Hiragana
ummm are yuki's pictures broken?
Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 17/08/12 - 06:12 pm · For: Hanabira Senshi
thumbs up!
that girl is HOT!
Author's Response: Hahaha, that's a new one. Glad you like her.
Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 17/08/12 - 06:11 pm · For: Yuki Hiragana
The images are broken
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 19/01/12 - 04:36 pm · For: Hanabira Senshi
Am I beginning to sound like a broken radio? Sorry. But whenever I read these OC bios I'm really reminded of my shortcomings and I admire you guys even more.......
So, some Q. How long does it take you to develop a character? How do you keep track of so many different Oc's? Is your plot set out before hand?
Honestly, If I set the plot out before hand, the story gets too dry for me. It becomes tasteless and boring so I can't continue writing it. Does this happen to you?
Thanks, sorry, I need to pick your brains to kickstart mine. Thanks a bunch!
Author's Response: Hiya! Well, first off, I'm very flattered you like my character just as much as you like DestinyGirl's and Sasaui's. Thank you so much! And you have some excellent questions here, very fit for an aspiring writer. Since I can't respond to the other reviews (as they're under DestinyGirl's and Sasaui's chapters), I'll try to answer your inquiries as best I can.
For me personally, the character development is planned along with the plot. I believe they tie in together. That doesn't mean you have to stick to any plot outline you may have; if the plot moves in a different direction, then let it. Because if your plot is changing, then perhaps your OC is changing as well. The process of developing a character should be a gradual thing. Let the readers witness the development just as the OC is experiencing it.
When you have a lot of OCs, the best thing is to make sure they don't have too many (if any) similarities. It's the worst when the characters have the same personality and similar appearance.
I usually have a sketchy outline of my plot. But I would be lying if I said I've never changed it. I have probably changed the plot for all of my stories several times while I'm in the middle of writing them. Your feelings of tasteless and boring stories after planning out the plot are actually very similar to what I experienced recently. I had planned so far into the plot that I just began wondering if it made sense anymore. So the only thing to do is rework the events from where you left off and see if what you've already written leads to something else.
But just so you know, the beginning of this story actually didn't have too much plot planned. We were literally making it up as we went along; whoever was next to update was able to write whatever they wanted. Only recently did we find out what we wanted, and we're still coming up with new ideas.
I hope this helps you some. If you ever need help, feel free to ask any of us. Good luck to you!
~silverwolf1213
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 19/01/12 - 04:28 pm · For: Taishi Tora and Shikon
As said before, I'm impressed by the amount of depth. I know it's odd but I've never really focused on character or plot development before starting a story ( yeah, and I payed the price, so I'm learning and developing my chracters now). Do you guys have the plot figured out?
I like Shikon. I also reeeally liked how you emphasized his mistrust of others by showing how he's "never seen asleep". Sounds odd, but that clicked it for me.
Author's Response: Yes, well, I don't think I should ever do these bio things. Why? I never stick to them. The only good thing about the bios on Tainted Guardian and Cursed Saint is I do them off what I've already written. With these I just made it up on the spot. But I like Taishi and his character. There's a lot more depth to him that you can see from reading Fate's Chosen. And yeah, Shikon is very protective. He'll do everything to keep Taishi safe.
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 19/01/12 - 04:23 pm · For: Yuki Hiragana
Ah - the pictures aren't coming up. :( Waah...
I'm really impressed at the amount of detail behind your character. It's always been hard for me to develop a background for my characters, and I like how you guys have done that for every OC. I hope you don't mind if I save this into my "Idea book" and use it later?
Author's Response:Aw, that's too bad... Maybe they will later?
Thx! I really like Yuki, she's now a personal favorite of mine. ^v^ Thx! We've really gotten connected in this story. It started out as an Rp (which we're still doing) with my character being strangely odd (being able to see the dead and communicate with things supernatural), and then Sasaui and SilverWolf added in their own OC's... I hadn't really nailed down the plot yet (because in an Rp everyone just sort of wings it), I just knew that Yuki would be going with Team Neji on a mission to a village with ties to the supernatural, like Yuki. And as we got deeper into it, the whole plot just started appearing before our eyes - but we still throw in different twists to make things interesting so it never dies.
No, feel free to do just that! ^_^ And thx so much for reviewing!:D
~ DestinyGirl
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 20/12/11 - 10:34 pm · For: Kasumi Saruni
wah~~~
now tht is a koolcharacter..
An Sasaui.. u really arepretty Awesome at drawing those characters... :DD
n lol is the dagger drawn by krina...? :P
n now tht i mention it... hvnt heard rather read from krnia lately... exams or somethin?
anyways...
quite some character... isee hw she fits in the plot... :D maybe... :P
n the demon cursing n exterminating n stuff is pretty kool too... :D
n the curse part n u knw... umm... boycotting part? (stupidme cnt think of the right word.. =_=) is pretty sad...
at hw they leave her alone for somethin she isn't responsible... just like Naruto
Anyways... Awesome job at this :DDD
Author's Response: Really? I don't think they're that good. I'm glad that you like the pictures, though. No, the dagger was drawn by the person who asked me to draw it (a friend of mine). As for Krina...... A lot of the time she just stops paying attention to Naruto. I don't know how to change that..... Until then, though, Krina's M.I.A. Yeah, Kasumi is a good character for this story. I think she truly fits into it as well. The demon thing..... I'll go more into detail on that the farther along Fate's Chosen goes. The Tear Village truly is cruel to her. She has a sucky life (as I'm sure you know from what you've read of her).
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 20/12/11 - 12:57 am · For: Yuki Hiragana
lol...
thnx..
its confusing who is replyin wat.. O_O'
n sorry Sasaui-chan >_<
i didnt mean it tht way...
i said it ws Urufu coz it had kiba in it... xDDD
Author's Response: No prob shadow-san! Sorry for the confusion, we'll get better at it, hopefully! :D
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 19/12/11 - 04:15 am · For: Hotaru Shirotori
is she the onr=e from Rekindle the lost flame..? :D
i think so...
n ui knw rp means role play..==
so plz describe for me wat it all means...?
plz?
Author's Response: Eh? She's not from Rekindle the Lost Flame, where'd you get that idea? I think I used her in another joint story, though I'm not exactly sure... Hmm, to clarify something when you were reviewing Sasaui's character, Deno (in this story) is not blind. Try not to get them confused ;) Now, as for the RP, it does mean role play. Basically, someone (DestinyGirl in this case) comes up wih an idea, and other people contribute by submitting their characters and updating the story. It's similar to a joint story, but the character owners have to help write the story as well.
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 19/12/11 - 04:14 am · For: Deno Kazukae
haha...
kool one Sasaui..:D
blind... another similarity... though its not him... but still :P
BTW
WATS THIS RP....??
PLZ CAN U TELL ME...? ^^
Author's Response: It's basically something we all started (DestinyGirl, Silverwolf, and myself) on fanfictionwriters. As for what exactly a RP is.... Well, I'm not entirely sure. I know what we're doing, but when I explain it I can't put it into words. Silverwolf or DestinyGirl could probably give you a better explanation.
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 19/12/11 - 04:11 am · For: Hanabira Senshi
this has to b u =_= if the last on wsnt... :P
the dislocatin joints thing is creepy... O_O'
but kool... :D
Author's Response: Yes! She is my character. Haha, I know, right? The thought struck me so suddenly that I couldn't ignore it. So now she has the weird ability. I'm glad you like her!
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 19/12/11 - 04:07 am · For: Taishi Tora and Shikon
hmmm....
i assume this character is made by Urufu...?
wild guess xD
anyways... an awesome character indeed :D
on the spot... u r kidding right? O_O'
u've gt one heck of a brain there... :P
Author's Response: Hahaha. No, Shadow-san, this was actually made by me (Sasaui Uchiha). Are you saying only Silverwolf can make awesome characters? I'm hurt, Shadow-san T_T. Now in case you don't know me that well, I'm completely joking about that...... Wait, on the spot? What do you mean? If you mean Taishi, then yeah, I made him up on the spot, but I didn't think I'd added that. I must have then.
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 16/12/11 - 07:48 am · For: Yuki Hiragana
haha... :D
pretty kool character :D
n cute too...;)
Snow spirit :O
she can talk with the dead...?!!!!
Thts freakin strange... O_O i mean ntin abad way...
bt being able to see the dead is not a pleasant experience... thts i cn say... D:
If u've seen 'supernatural' the movie..u'l knw wat i mean :P
anyways... an Awesome character ^^
Author's Response: Thx so much! ^_^ Yep, she can.:P Something new and different, and I've seen plenty of ghost movies and tv shows;) Thx! I'm glad you like Yuki:)