Reviews For A Boy's Life According to Pervy Sennin
Name: coolninja90skid (Signed) · Date: 27/04/15 - 01:09 pm · For: Chapter 1
hey i loved it
if you write another one can i be in it?
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/11/11 - 04:42 pm · For: Chapter 1
*slams head against desk* I feel like an idiot. Such an idiot. I didn't realize the kid was Minato until he changed his name. Seriously, the entire thing with the flash should have at least given me some kind of hint. I'm so stupid... And if you're thinking that it was something about you're writing, don't even worry about it, it was all definitely my fault. I'm just dense sometimes.
Anyway!
This is probably the best one-shot I've ever read. And it's usually hard for me to enjoy one-shots because they're usually short mushy romances that are over quickly. I'm definitely going to remember this one though.
This entire thing was just amazing. It was so imaginative and creative, I just flat out enjoyed the whole thing. The entire thing with the mom's love and Hikaru/Minato's gambling issue, and even Jiraiya's personality was just so interesting to read. Jiraiya's view had a nice spin on things, it even made it easier for me to get into. His perspective and attitude throughout the story was definitely in character, and I really liked his view.
This entire thing was just incredible. I can even imagine this as the real story behind Minato Namikaze. And the weirdest part of this entire thing is... you wrote this when you were sick and you think that you were delirious when writing it. That's just astounding. You did a great job on this one-shot. Keep up the awesome work with your writing!
Author's Response: Thanks and no worries. I was kinda hoping that people won't realize it until that point.