Reviews For Ino, Sakura and the Chocolate Monkeys
Name: DestinyGirl (Signed) · Date: 10/01/12 - 05:52 am · For: Ino, Sakura and the Chocolate Monkeys
First of all, I love your writing BattBigSis! Second, oh dear God, the (evil) Chocolate Monkeys! At least they're not... throwing things at people in this chapter, which I'm thankful for. *breathes a sigh of relief* Anyway, your writing is very colorful and well-descriptive, I really enjoyed it! You captured Sakura and Ino so well, it was like a short piece from Kishimoto-sensei himself!:D
Author's Response: I imagine 'throwing things' is a special feature in their live gigs. One of those bands were you're well advised keep away from the front row, I fear...I was so surprised to get a new review for this. It was just a really short, random scene... but thank you for reading it nevertheless and for your kind words about it. I try to do my best and I'm pleased that came across. ;0)
Name: Demon Fox (Signed) · Date: 14/09/11 - 03:14 pm · For: Ino, Sakura and the Chocolate Monkeys
Oh my goodness, how did I miss this?! Chocolate Monkeys, awesome! Haha, if they really were a band, I'd buy so many albums XD And posters and stuff, of course :D Haha, I found this really fun and entertaining, nice job Batty!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Yeah, I love Sasaui's ideas sometimes. She's so creative. ;0)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 24/08/11 - 06:02 pm · For: Ino, Sakura and the Chocolate Monkeys
......-_-...... Crap! I'm so so soooo sorry!!! I didn't know that you needed more information. Sorry sorry sorry. Please forgive on that. If I just wasn't paying attention and missed a post or mail thing, tell me. If not, let me know what you need to know.
As for your story, haha. I bet people would think I was crazy with all that chocolate monkey and chocolate chip hamster stuff. It was hilarious. I absolutely loved it. I was a little scared when you mentioned the hair thing because I thought somebody was about to go bald. Although that would have been hilarious. The stupid cannibals mostly started eating hair after trying to eat my hair because they thought it was chocolate...... So how many people do you think will think I'm crazy after reading this review?
Okay, I'm going to try to get back on track. I give this story eight thumbs up. It was just plain awesome. At least everyone's not focused on Sasuke now.
Author's Response: .... No - I'm sorry. I didn't mean to confuse you. I wrote this ages ago. Before I wrote chapters 1 and 2 for Star Angel, in the evening or so between my posting on your site that I was interested in co-authoring and your responding and telling me all about the story and what it was all about. This was just a random idea I wrote out then. I did use some of it, noticeably the Chocolate Monkeys CD, but not all of it. I just found it again when I started on Chapter 3 of Star Angel today and so I thought it was worth posting as a one-shot. Sorry for the confusion...
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/08/11 - 06:01 pm · For: Ino, Sakura and the Chocolate Monkeys
Haha! I love this! Chocolate monkeys are just amazing! Brilliant imagination here, BattyBigSis, it left me smiling the whole time, just because the girls are so into their music and then they reverted back to their dreamboat. This was such a fun one-shot, great work!
Author's Response: Yeah, I wanted something that showed them more as girls then as Kunoichi and turning Sasaui's chocolate monkeys into a boyband gave me the chance to do that. I was just trying to get Ino's personality down right as well because I was less used to writing it. Glad you liked it!